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Love Candle
My love is incandescent
Will your love be enough
Can you handle being so close to the fire
I can handle you and my love of you
Will your love be enough
Can you handle being so close to the fire
I can handle you and my love of you
Published 11th Oct 2024
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11th Oct 2024 10:22am
11th Oct 2024 10:26am
Thank You Lil DF! I’m so new to this and when I get some feedback especially positive it makes me want to keep exploring my mind.
11th Oct 2024 10:31am
I love the brevity in this... the pair of couplets say so much... a blend of bold and vulnerable...
11th Oct 2024 10:55am
I just learned from your comment. What a couplet is and that I can write one. Lol
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