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it hurts (to be in and out of love)

could you  
lay down  
in a  
field and  
tell me,  
would you  
miss  
the trees  
 
what about  
the place  
we first  
met,  
can you  
remember  
what i  
looked like  
 
how  
do you  
stay there  
too long,  
dramatized  
over what  
you lostd
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