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Next November

Although I’m in a better place, I wish that I was here to stay.
'Cause even with eternal bliss, heaven doesn’t have your kiss.
When I look down and see your cries, I wish that I was by your side.
But don’t be in a rush to leave. You have both our dreams you must achieve.
And never feel you’re on your own. My love for you is set in stone.
So if you need to carry on, I know that you’ve been very strong.
So live and love, and just remember, we’ll catch up again next November.
Written by tomgoonery (Tommy.)
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Author's Note
This is a submission for "Day of the Dead 2024".
Prompt: "Write from the perspective of a dead soul rejoining their family. What would you say to your loved ones?"
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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