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Absinthe Minded
Froward deity
Spinning intoxication
Through candied visions
Spinning intoxication
Through candied visions
Published 9th Oct 2024
| Edited 23rd Oct 2024
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9th Oct 2024 2:54pm
Hi! Welcome back. A drug/alcohol is like candy to people. Like that wording.
Cool senryu.
Perfect title
Cool senryu.
Perfect title
10th Oct 2024 1:34am
Hey, good to see you. Glad you checked this out. It's always good to hear from you. The "candied intoxication" part is like the reward/satisfaction, like a child would get in a lollipop. Thank you for taking the time to share your interpretation.
