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Before Coffee
Waking up to the scent of ecstasy
reaching over to my right, puppies lying next to me
So, the other had to be making what I Need
But my body seems to want something else in greed
Pushing his hand toward the apex and moving time
Awakening and obediently doing what I desire
circling and spreading lips to make me climb higher
the other walks through the door
See what puppy is doing and wants to do it before
“Come to me and take what you want.”
As a servant does what a mistress demands
Crawling to the left, avoiding puppy's hands
Spreading the lips apart and only sucking on one
Puppy went down and took the other one
Two mouths on spread lips sucking so hard
Two fingers pushed in a channel
There must be a God
“Don't stop continue’ I say
as my hips grind and meet their hungry eyes on display
grabbing two heads, keeping them where I need them
two more fingers shoved my back door. I thrust up as I greet him
Thighs quivering,
Mouths unwavering.
Every delicious beat I'm savoring.
Coming close to the edge
“Don't stop!”
Coming close to the edge
About to pop
A nip here and nip over there
I'm flying and soaring
I release their hair
They watch me adoring.
They watch me, waiting until I'm done
I looked at both of them and commanded
“Take fill of my cum”
reaching over to my right, puppies lying next to me
So, the other had to be making what I Need
But my body seems to want something else in greed
Pushing his hand toward the apex and moving time
Awakening and obediently doing what I desire
circling and spreading lips to make me climb higher
the other walks through the door
See what puppy is doing and wants to do it before
“Come to me and take what you want.”
As a servant does what a mistress demands
Crawling to the left, avoiding puppy's hands
Spreading the lips apart and only sucking on one
Puppy went down and took the other one
Two mouths on spread lips sucking so hard
Two fingers pushed in a channel
There must be a God
“Don't stop continue’ I say
as my hips grind and meet their hungry eyes on display
grabbing two heads, keeping them where I need them
two more fingers shoved my back door. I thrust up as I greet him
Thighs quivering,
Mouths unwavering.
Every delicious beat I'm savoring.
Coming close to the edge
“Don't stop!”
Coming close to the edge
About to pop
A nip here and nip over there
I'm flying and soaring
I release their hair
They watch me adoring.
They watch me, waiting until I'm done
I looked at both of them and commanded
“Take fill of my cum”
Author's Note
Good morning to you. It's Friday. You know what I do? P.S do not use auto correct. It keeps changing my words.
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4th Oct 2024 12:41pm
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4th Oct 2024 6:10pm
Hot stuff Fia. Just listened to the narration. This could have been aired in the early 90's on the Playboy channel. "Fia, Up all night!" Marvelous!
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4th Oct 2024 2:30pm
At first I thought: oh, you have puppies - how cute.
...I should have known better :-D
Great piece, dear Fia, making them do what you crave...
...I should have known better :-D
Great piece, dear Fia, making them do what you crave...
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4th Oct 2024 2:53pm
You had me laughing. I love puppy's. (In this instance Human one's)
Thank you, Duende
Thank you, Duende
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4th Oct 2024 3:02pm
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4th Oct 2024 8:40pm
I need a coffee flavoured JD. I'd get drunk on a Friday morning drinking my favourite liquor from her naked body.
And yes, there'll be a big splash of cream. ;p
Now if you'll excuse me my dear, I need to go take a cool shower before I have a cardiac.
Xxx
And yes, there'll be a big splash of cream. ;p
Now if you'll excuse me my dear, I need to go take a cool shower before I have a cardiac.
Xxx
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5th Oct 2024 3:51am
Let me guess, Fia. You've started making Fiaberry coffee. And these are the effects, sounds like this stuff keeps you up all night. Sexy write. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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5th Oct 2024 2:01pm
Being catered to, without question or hesitation, is one of those things that takes a person straight to Heaven while still alive. Of course, the way one's breathing may pause or even stop, makes the "alive" part touch and go.
I really like this ink. Thank You
I really like this ink. Thank You
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