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Here
I could not build a wall high enough
The trenches I dug were never deep enough
I was never skilled in creating the perfect barrier between you and I
So here
I leave the key on the table
Dinner is at six
And I will be in bed waiting
The trenches I dug were never deep enough
I was never skilled in creating the perfect barrier between you and I
So here
I leave the key on the table
Dinner is at six
And I will be in bed waiting
Published 4th Oct 2024
Author's Note
This is definitely random thoughts put together. That is all
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4th Oct 2024 00:30am
4th Oct 2024 00:31am
4th Oct 2024 00:34am
ok cool. I'll be there in 15 minutes. Should I ring the bell or just come right in?
4th Oct 2024 00:38am
4th Oct 2024 00:56am
Is your bedroom door locked then, hence the key? Or is it more, a symbolic key? 🗝
4th Oct 2024 1:01am
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4th Oct 2024 1:34am
4th Oct 2024 1:32am
What Mary said 😊
You can try to convince yourself
someone is out of your system,
and fail.
Cool arrangement of thoughts.
You can try to convince yourself
someone is out of your system,
and fail.
Cool arrangement of thoughts.
4th Oct 2024 1:35am
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4th Oct 2024 11:10am
This one certainly leaves a lot open to the imagination.
Intriguing last three lines. Great piece, dear Fia :-)
Intriguing last three lines. Great piece, dear Fia :-)
4th Oct 2024 11:22am
4th Oct 2024 11:28pm
This is my favourite poem of yours that I’ve read thus far. It’s short, concise, and tells a story with distinctive characters.
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