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Getting Started
He lays there
NAKED
Making me hot
I quickly make my way over
Climbing on top
Gazing into his eyes
Seductively biting my lip
He watches my closely as his rod grows stiff
Giving him a couple quick licks for a tease
Then slowly taking him all in at once
WITH EASE
Bobbing and twirling my head side to side
Up
Then down
His moans
My slurps
The only sounds
Slow kisses down his shaft
Making my way to his jewels
His head begins to swell
Not a minute too soon
His breathing grows heavy as he begins to thrust
Taking him all in knowing he's about to bust
Complete satisfaction
Oozing out from the tip
Licking him clean as we're only getting started
NAKED
Making me hot
I quickly make my way over
Climbing on top
Gazing into his eyes
Seductively biting my lip
He watches my closely as his rod grows stiff
Giving him a couple quick licks for a tease
Then slowly taking him all in at once
WITH EASE
Bobbing and twirling my head side to side
Up
Then down
His moans
My slurps
The only sounds
Slow kisses down his shaft
Making my way to his jewels
His head begins to swell
Not a minute too soon
His breathing grows heavy as he begins to thrust
Taking him all in knowing he's about to bust
Complete satisfaction
Oozing out from the tip
Licking him clean as we're only getting started
Published 16th May 2012
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16th May 2012 9:34pm
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17th May 2012 5:16pm
Great Beginning to a wonderful relationship here at the DU. I'm just going to say it. This is a beautiful extrapolation of an african american woman feelings in words about "handling" a man's cock. mad props on the good work. I will definitely be following you : ) Check me out as well......
...http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/42892-nas-tee/ (just a sample of some required reading around these parts) ; )
...http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/42892-nas-tee/ (just a sample of some required reading around these parts) ; )
17th May 2012 5:55pm
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18th May 2012 11:26pm
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29th Jan 2013 7:57am
HOTHOTHOT!!!DAMN That was HOT!!!
Fuckin Great read and write sweets!!!
WELCOME TO THE DU!!
Sir Lancelott
Fuckin Great read and write sweets!!!
WELCOME TO THE DU!!
Sir Lancelott
24th Jun 2014 10:22pm
