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Drug
When did I make you my drug of choice?
I did not realize I had you so embedded
Until the withdrawal started
The constant wanting to talk
The pull that was never supposed to be
Withdrawal has started
Fine, don’t call
Don’t text
I am totally fine with silence
Withdrawal has started
To hell with it all
I’m sweating for what?
Withdrawal
Ok, I understand
This is too much
I can be too much
Withdrawal
Numb
I see clearly though
Gone
I did not realize I had you so embedded
Until the withdrawal started
The constant wanting to talk
The pull that was never supposed to be
Withdrawal has started
Fine, don’t call
Don’t text
I am totally fine with silence
Withdrawal has started
To hell with it all
I’m sweating for what?
Withdrawal
Ok, I understand
This is too much
I can be too much
Withdrawal
Numb
I see clearly though
Gone
Published 1st Oct 2024
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1st Oct 2024 8:28pm
1st Oct 2024 8:29pm
1st Oct 2024 8:30pm
1st Oct 2024 9:01pm
I used to be someone’s drug of choice. It’s a whirlwind…crazy…intoxicating…then he went and got clean.
The let down is exactly like withdrawal.
Well penned, girl.
The let down is exactly like withdrawal.
Well penned, girl.
1st Oct 2024 9:02pm
2nd Oct 2024 00:38am
I have a confession to make… I have a problem with this kind of addiction… I can’t get to the withdrawal stage… deep inside I still need this addiction even when they have already moved on… this is a great poem Fia.. great
2nd Oct 2024 00:40am
2nd Oct 2024 1:38am
I hope you don't need them.anymore. you are self sufficient and strong enough to survive with your dark emotions. Prayers and Strength to you
2nd Oct 2024 1:49am
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2nd Oct 2024 9:15am
2nd Oct 2024 11:43am
I always love your way of literary treatment, that differs that the subject matter treatment,
Form and style are not substance...
The thoughtful method applied is really well studied, grammatically speaking always;
but, withdrawal from a habit is so hard to start, as a bad rooted habit, needs time and sacrifice to be rooted out.its like walking backward trying to eliminate any former trace of the habit.......
never can we eradicate a rooted routine, if we dont have courage, patience, resolution and self trust....
Thanks Fia, moderation is the best way to live and have a sane mind, very good relationship....
Stay happy and thriving..Hamid
Form and style are not substance...
The thoughtful method applied is really well studied, grammatically speaking always;
but, withdrawal from a habit is so hard to start, as a bad rooted habit, needs time and sacrifice to be rooted out.its like walking backward trying to eliminate any former trace of the habit.......
never can we eradicate a rooted routine, if we dont have courage, patience, resolution and self trust....
Thanks Fia, moderation is the best way to live and have a sane mind, very good relationship....
Stay happy and thriving..Hamid
2nd Oct 2024 12:57pm
Thank you, Hamid. And I do agree with that. Something that is deeply embedded will take time to undue.
To have the strength to walk away from a friendship that has been a good part of your life is like going through a withdrawal in a sense.
Alway, appreciate your comments.
To have the strength to walk away from a friendship that has been a good part of your life is like going through a withdrawal in a sense.
Alway, appreciate your comments.
2nd Oct 2024 1:03pm
Its hard to get rid of a bad habit in a wink of an eye, what starts little
by little must end little by little, or else, it may bring some side affects on the soul.......Mind Over Mood..
by little must end little by little, or else, it may bring some side affects on the soul.......Mind Over Mood..
2nd Oct 2024 1:32pm
People can truly be drugs and quite addictive too.
The repetition of "Withdrawal has started" really works.
Great piece, Fia 💕
The repetition of "Withdrawal has started" really works.
Great piece, Fia 💕
2nd Oct 2024 1:38pm
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