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Madam Blackhearts
Don't know what I'm doing here
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME
YOUR FACE I'M GOING TO BLESS
Madam Blackheaets
For the brave and bold
Tortured souls, left
Feeling cold
Bondage whip excess
Dutch courage, one more beer
Help, I'm in distress!
She gives out evil if you're good
"LICK THIS LEATHER DRESS"
A dark heart spills black blood
Her pierced tongue knows what's best
"YOU'RE MY SLAVE, YOU ARE WEAK
MY MIND IS SO OBSESSED
UNZIP MY CROTCH, TAKE A PEEK
DO WHAT I SAY UNLESS!"
"GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME
YOUR FACE I'M GOING TO BLESS
Madam Blackheaets
For the brave and bold
Tortured souls, left
Feeling cold
Published 1st Oct 2024
| Edited 20th Dec 2024
Author's Note
69 Shades of Pete #3
Wrote this after re-watching 'From Dawn Till Dusk' boxset again, loosely around erotic vampiress's but struggled on the last stanza... don't know if it goes or not? Anyways 🙃
Wrote this after re-watching 'From Dawn Till Dusk' boxset again, loosely around erotic vampiress's but struggled on the last stanza... don't know if it goes or not? Anyways 🙃
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1st Oct 2024 9:11am
1st Oct 2024 10:08am
1st Oct 2024 12:16pm
Ah, do we have another BDSM-er here? Welcome to the club ;-)
Great piece Pete, I don't see anything wrong with the last stanza, it really works.
Great piece Pete, I don't see anything wrong with the last stanza, it really works.
1st Oct 2024 12:48pm
Haha Thank You Duende, I've wrote a few 🙃 and Thank You for your kind words ❤️
2nd Oct 2024 4:11am
Brilliant write, Pete. The ending made me think of an advertisement on television, telling you why you need to come on down to Madam Blackhearts. Where blood runs cold. lol. Appreciate you.
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2nd Oct 2024 10:34am
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3rd Oct 2024 5:16pm
'' "GET YOUR FACE UNDERNEATH MY BUM
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME
YOUR FACE I'M GOING TO BLESS ''
Haha...classic erotica!!!
Diggin this entire vibe for sure
LIFT THIS LEATHER DRESS
HOLD ON TIGHT, I'M ABOUT TO COME
YOUR FACE I'M GOING TO BLESS ''
Haha...classic erotica!!!
Diggin this entire vibe for sure
