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dear corey
I miss you like fucking crazy somtimes i think im going insane without your touch i feel my self falling from humanity i miss laying in your arms at even though thats wat got us into trouble i would rather have your parents bitching at me than me sitting so many miles away seriously maybe i am going crazy but one thing is clear that i miss you like fucking Te Amo Lynette forever is ours
Published 16th May 2012
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9th Oct 2013 11:12am
I love the emotions that you wanted give out.. .
but I would like to suggest u to work on punctuations on your stuff so that the emotions that u want your reader to feel stands out in a more effective manner .....
except for that its a great piece.. keep up the good work.
cyanide...
but I would like to suggest u to work on punctuations on your stuff so that the emotions that u want your reader to feel stands out in a more effective manner .....
except for that its a great piece.. keep up the good work.
cyanide...
