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He was born to die
Trying to stay positive
He was told 4 months
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. 23
24th Sep 2024 1:47pm
Ouch... this one stings...
LilDragonFly
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24th Sep 2024 1:55pm
Sadly I knew someone around that age years back that had an illness. Very difficult situation.
Thanks for the comments
Vision_of_insanity
Re. 23
(Debbie)
24th Sep 2024 4:32pm
Wow that's heavy. We are born to die.
deliabear
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24th Sep 2024 4:56pm
Yes. Thank you Debbie
Vision_of_insanity
Re. 23
(Damian DeadLove)
25th Sep 2024 3:08am
Heavy write. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

DL
DamianDeadLove
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25th Sep 2024 10:53am
Thanks!
Vision_of_insanity
Re. 23
25th Sep 2024 1:03pm
He got caught cheating by the wrong girl
AfterSexDilemma
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25th Sep 2024 1:06pm
Possibly
Vision_of_insanity

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