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He was born to die
Trying to stay positive
He was told 4 months

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 24th Sep 2024

#death #illness #senryu

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LilDragonFly

24th Sep 2024 1:47pm

Ouch... this one stings...

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Vision_of_insanity

24th Sep 2024 1:55pm

Sadly I knew someone around that age years back that had an illness. Very difficult situation.
Thanks for the comments

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deliabear (Debbie)

24th Sep 2024 4:32pm

Wow that's heavy. We are born to die.

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Vision_of_insanity

24th Sep 2024 4:56pm

Yes. Thank you Debbie

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DamianDeadLove (Damian DeadLove)

25th Sep 2024 3:08am

Heavy write. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

DL

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Vision_of_insanity

25th Sep 2024 10:53am

Thanks!

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AfterSexDilemma

25th Sep 2024 1:03pm

He got caught cheating by the wrong girl

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Vision_of_insanity

25th Sep 2024 1:06pm

Possibly

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