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United In The Murky Depths Of Epiphany
The adventure is in your mind
The planet is crushed in the palm of my hand
When time tries to drown the dream
Inside your mind, just come with me
It's high time to turn the key
And leave here for eternity
When life turns a blind eye
I will help and make you see
It's high time to turn the key
And leave here for eternity
The planet is crushed in the palm of my hand
When time tries to drown the dream
Inside your mind, just come with me
It's high time to turn the key
And leave here for eternity
When life turns a blind eye
I will help and make you see
It's high time to turn the key
And leave here for eternity
Published 18th Sep 2024
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19th Sep 2024 5:42am
Interesting. This has a definite genre to it. I don't know how to describe it but I can see this being played maybe at a goth club or something similar. Nice stuff.
19th Sep 2024 12:36pm
Awesome, thank you, I shall imagine it being played in Germany to a crowd of goths stomping around in Docs!
19th Sep 2024 1:00pm
Fantastic! You're words, the music & video are stellar. You have a vision & I like it! Nicely executed.
