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Without Auditions _ with "Adagio"
They don’t have a set time to visit, these voices,
Like turmoil striking every corner of my mind
A cacophony of whispers, impossible to unwind,
Swirling in shadows, tightening their grip
As invisible tendrils take roots within.
Uninvited without auditions, or recall
Speaking without any validation
Lingering beyond the disembodied darkness
Feeling the pulse of its inequity.
A riddle of noise I can’t seem to untangle,
Indecipherable, no matter how I strain to listen.
Am I descending into madness?
Like turmoil striking every corner of my mind
A cacophony of whispers, impossible to unwind,
Swirling in shadows, tightening their grip
As invisible tendrils take roots within.
Uninvited without auditions, or recall
Speaking without any validation
Lingering beyond the disembodied darkness
Feeling the pulse of its inequity.
A riddle of noise I can’t seem to untangle,
Indecipherable, no matter how I strain to listen.
Am I descending into madness?
Author's Note
Should’ve booked an appointment, at least!
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Re. Without Auditions - with "Adagio"
14th Sep 2024 3:45pm
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14th Sep 2024 4:41pm
i don’t think i’ll eat that. i’m not going to risk getting a stomach ache.
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14th Sep 2024 5:03pm
You have find the imaginary needle first, sew it back together, and place it on top of a Lava lamp.
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14th Sep 2024 5:09pm
i don’t think i like it anymore. his gargoyle eyes are giving me the creepy-crawly.
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14th Sep 2024 5:14pm
Then put dark glasses over his eyes, it's that simple. Gargoyles are just The Big Bad Wolf in disguise.
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i just had a dream about it last night. was it a vision... am i the chosen one?
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Re. Without Auditions - with "Adagio"
14th Sep 2024 4:57pm
Fantastic my friend. A great collaboration with some dark, moving words & a cool image
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15th Sep 2024 00:38am
@Lilliputian...this is so good.
Yes, I skipped over other opinions. So maybe this has been said. But
'Am I descending into madness?'
Such a powerful closer. I'll be re-reading this again & again.
I appreciate your absence of the conventional. a true voice.
Yes, I skipped over other opinions. So maybe this has been said. But
'Am I descending into madness?'
Such a powerful closer. I'll be re-reading this again & again.
I appreciate your absence of the conventional. a true voice.
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15th Sep 2024 00:42am
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15th Sep 2024 4:44am
Home-run, you two. I love your collaborations together. Great read. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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