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Forgive me my love

 
Forgive me my love
For I have sinned  
 
I failed to give you the
Dreams you had wished
 
A life of bliss in a world
We tried hard to build  
 
I should have known ours
Wasn’t meant to be fulfilled  
 
I don’t know when our
Passions were dimmed  
 
It must have started
When lust was killed  
 
When love was made
Seldom at nights abridged
 
I should have pushed harder
Fucked harder or maybe rimmed    
 
I should have spread your wings
Pushed further where it was forbid
 
I should have made love to you
In the Hindh and in the Sindh
 
Taken you to see the world
Made love in London and Madrid
 
It is my fault for thinking
Life is meant to be thrilled  
 
We’ve always had things
We hadn’t much adhered  
 
The music you like in life
Is not mine I like chilled
 
However we tried our best
To walk in spite of the wind  
 
To fulfill those dreams
That were barely skimmed
 
I hope you forgive my blunder
And all the sins that I ever did
 
I didn’t mean to make you cry
And the tears I see you spilled
 
I will go my way and hope
Your life you can better rebuild
Written by Samnash (Sam Nash)
Published | Edited 26th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Check out this song on Suno based on this poem

https://suno.com/song/9c7671e9-d74f-4296-8eae-ee711bb266bc
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