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Rose
Your beauty is like The Rose
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal, acclimating my touch
Are my hands too rough to move further in
A drop of crystallized dew has blessed my eyes with its pleasures
There are 40 petals that I must push pass
Will..you… (Sigh)
Do you know that every rose has 40 pedals
Within every petal, there is a slight variation
A nuance that shows its imperfection
But the imperfection is perfection in the eye of the beholder
The outer petals bloom and peel back
Showing softer, more timid petals
Kissed by Venus herself
Never to have been touched
Tempting you to touch
A petal unfurls
Revealing
The inner chamber
The rose will decide if
and only if you approach with delicate care
I'm still on the outer petal, acclimating my touch
Are my hands too rough to move further in
A drop of crystallized dew has blessed my eyes with its pleasures
There are 40 petals that I must push pass
Will..you… (Sigh)
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