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Slow and Steady
I rise with the sun
I aim to be the number one
You can catch me at a low, but my journey has just begun
I’ve made some mistakes
My skin’s tough; I won’t break
I soldier on through the blows; slow and steady wins the race
I aim to be the number one
You can catch me at a low, but my journey has just begun
I’ve made some mistakes
My skin’s tough; I won’t break
I soldier on through the blows; slow and steady wins the race
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4th Sep 2024 2:04pm
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Re. Slow and Steady
5th Sep 2024 4:36am
Powerful write, Luna. A really hopeful piece of ink. Dig this. Appreciate you.
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5th Sep 2024 7:23pm
Re. Slow and Steady
5th Sep 2024 4:48am
Dear LC,
I thoroughly appreciated the encouraging message and success of personal detetmination in this piece. For me, it made me rethink my attitude for throwing in the towel on a particular situation. Terrific write. H🌷
I thoroughly appreciated the encouraging message and success of personal detetmination in this piece. For me, it made me rethink my attitude for throwing in the towel on a particular situation. Terrific write. H🌷
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5th Sep 2024 7:25pm
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9th Sep 2024 3:23pm
Such a powerful affirmation this is!
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