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ESCAPE
ever ride just for fun
in a truck that will not run?
she say "whachu cussin' for"
he walks right out and slams the door
i take that ride to Folly Beach
or someplace quiet, out of reach
would you like to take a ride?
just buckle up and close your eyes
in a truck that will not run?
she say "whachu cussin' for"
he walks right out and slams the door
i take that ride to Folly Beach
or someplace quiet, out of reach
would you like to take a ride?
just buckle up and close your eyes
Published 25th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by the Crazy 8's comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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25th Aug 2024 7:32pm
Dear J,
Awesome write. Love the conversational style and the rhyming is stellar. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
Awesome write. Love the conversational style and the rhyming is stellar. I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
25th Aug 2024 7:42pm
25th Aug 2024 7:39pm
25th Aug 2024 7:46pm
25th Aug 2024 11:08pm
A+ I remember hitchhiking and being picked up by this truck...always wondered what happened to it? Hugs and love, Oral
26th Aug 2024 10:59am
That truck has been everywhere.
Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.
Always appreciated.
Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend.
Always appreciated.
26th Aug 2024 2:57pm
Folly beach, but only in late fall. Those July crowds are murder. Bad as Hilton head.
Jekyll Island is my quiet place.
Jekyll Island is my quiet place.
26th Aug 2024 9:12pm
Thank you for reading and commenting.
You're probably right -- Folly Beach in the fall.
Edisto...too many syllables.
You're probably right -- Folly Beach in the fall.
Edisto...too many syllables.
