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These Chains
Meteors
Into the minds eye
At the speed
of
Light
A brightening – White light
Bursting
from
letters-thirsting
to
break
The fetters
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
Into the minds eye
At the speed
of
Light
A brightening – White light
Bursting
from
letters-thirsting
to
break
The fetters
***
PA/TH
WA/ES
***
Published 21st Aug 2024
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22nd Aug 2024 5:23am
Dear CO,
Your poems are like performance art. They have the ability to ingratiate the reader and take them to places unseen. Bold and exciting. H🌷
Your poems are like performance art. They have the ability to ingratiate the reader and take them to places unseen. Bold and exciting. H🌷
22nd Aug 2024 8:16am
Thank you Honoria...
I greatly appreciate your thoughts
and perspectives...
I have been thinking a lot
about poetry...
The art form...
On a number of levels...
I strive to implement
a certain...
(You inspired me Honoria...
Not the first time I might add...
:)...)
I greatly appreciate your thoughts
and perspectives...
I have been thinking a lot
about poetry...
The art form...
On a number of levels...
I strive to implement
a certain...
(You inspired me Honoria...
Not the first time I might add...
:)...)
23rd Aug 2024 3:48am
I think a lot about poetry also. On many levels it intimidates me. Mostly, I haven’t the foggiest notion about it and I find I’ve learned and continue to learn so much about it from this site. You are all my teachers 😊
