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I Bleed
When I woke, I felt nothing.
I could breathe,
I could feel my heart beating uncontrollably.
I can feel my blood run through my veins.
Last night you told me it was over.
Those words cut,
I felt it to the bone.
No deeper within the bone,
to the marrow.
Now you're gone.
Honestly, I do not know who I was with you.
Now I'm alone.
Still do not know, who I am.
I need your eyes,
and longed for your touch.
Every kiss was a kiss I cherished.
But then, I lost me.
To the kiss,
to the touch,
to those eyes.
I lay here bleeding,
it doesn't hurt.
It might've before.
But I lost me.
This body,
this blood,
spills for you.
I am alone.
I was alone with you.
No, I will not die.
This body will go on.
I just miss the love
that was so passionate
that no one,
absolutely no one;
could have felt,
the way I felt for you.
Now I don't feel at all.
The bleeding has stopped.
The tears started.
It seems my body has betrayed me.
It seems, I truly realize what has ended
I could breathe,
I could feel my heart beating uncontrollably.
I can feel my blood run through my veins.
Last night you told me it was over.
Those words cut,
I felt it to the bone.
No deeper within the bone,
to the marrow.
Now you're gone.
Honestly, I do not know who I was with you.
Now I'm alone.
Still do not know, who I am.
I need your eyes,
and longed for your touch.
Every kiss was a kiss I cherished.
But then, I lost me.
To the kiss,
to the touch,
to those eyes.
I lay here bleeding,
it doesn't hurt.
It might've before.
But I lost me.
This body,
this blood,
spills for you.
I am alone.
I was alone with you.
No, I will not die.
This body will go on.
I just miss the love
that was so passionate
that no one,
absolutely no one;
could have felt,
the way I felt for you.
Now I don't feel at all.
The bleeding has stopped.
The tears started.
It seems my body has betrayed me.
It seems, I truly realize what has ended
Author's Note
This was one of the poems I was going to publish in my book and decided to not publish. I give it to you.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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Re. I Bleed
19th Aug 2024 2:29am
Very powerful write. I could feel the sadness and pain in your words. Thanks so much for sharing. I can definitely relate. Appreciate you.
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19th Aug 2024 4:01pm
Re. I Bleed
19th Aug 2024 3:41am
hello beautiful Fia I can really relate to the pain in this poem it's very powerful 💕
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19th Aug 2024 4:06pm
Re. I Bleed
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Re. I Bleed
19th Aug 2024 10:16am
Reads like delayed shock to me. Yes, you will go on living but with a heavier heart.
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Re. I Bleed
22nd Aug 2024 2:59am
And we appreciate you sharing it.
This is great in that it isn't some pitiful type, woe is me, write. It's fully relatable to all, with a mature outlook on loss and self reflection. We gain from your writing of how you feel about it. It's a people write. We feel it.
Awesome write, Fia.
This is great in that it isn't some pitiful type, woe is me, write. It's fully relatable to all, with a mature outlook on loss and self reflection. We gain from your writing of how you feel about it. It's a people write. We feel it.
Awesome write, Fia.
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Re. I Bleed
24th Aug 2024 3:57am
Styx said it best. You really expressed the breadth and depth of the loss and the way you had to process such a sudden change. Really well done.
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24th Aug 2024 3:59am