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Unanimated
eyes are bloodshot
head hurts
feeling dizzy as he walks
heart races like nascar
ignoring the symptoms
doctors just dismiss it
friends see it in his face
something’s wrong
but there’s no help
till the day he becomes so…
unanimated
her stomach hurts
everything she eats
makes her want to puke
the diagnosis is set
cancer of the ovaries
her first thoughts are
not of death
but of debt
leaving burden as inheritance
until the day she becomes so…
unanimated
just got that promotion
they are set to wed
a kid on the way
and the whole world ahead
something so dark
doesn’t even cross their mind
the rise in crime however
sets their sights
a couple of shots and it’s all over
so what’s the point?
not a god damn thing
head hurts
feeling dizzy as he walks
heart races like nascar
ignoring the symptoms
doctors just dismiss it
friends see it in his face
something’s wrong
but there’s no help
till the day he becomes so…
unanimated
her stomach hurts
everything she eats
makes her want to puke
the diagnosis is set
cancer of the ovaries
her first thoughts are
not of death
but of debt
leaving burden as inheritance
until the day she becomes so…
unanimated
just got that promotion
they are set to wed
a kid on the way
and the whole world ahead
something so dark
doesn’t even cross their mind
the rise in crime however
sets their sights
a couple of shots and it’s all over
so what’s the point?
not a god damn thing
Published 17th Aug 2024
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17th Aug 2024 10:48am
Raw and uncut straight forward attitude with the deepness of the truth of reality of life 🤨👍🔥 DROP THE MIC 🎤
17th Aug 2024 7:05pm
18th Aug 2024 8:04am
Thank you, friend. I been having some negative side effects due to some medicine. Nothing life threatening, but it made me think of if I died is this how it would feel? I was also thinking of how sad it is for someone to die. Mostly in the view of the dead. How people stop talking about them, when they do they cry. The things that person enjoyed only brings their loved ones down.
Guess that's just the other side of the coin. I always appreciate your comments, friend 😁
Guess that's just the other side of the coin. I always appreciate your comments, friend 😁
