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A Little Bird Cheeped While I Was Trying to Type
I don't think you understand what a writing zone is
I don't think you get how hard you being here is
I need to quietly live and give
my every ounce
your every whisper a shout
your every throat cleared
appearance of doubt
I'm an artist fragile, glass,
paper thin
vulnerable to the wind
too enraged to write when I see you engage in your sin,
leave me
I'm wafer thin
I don't think you get how hard you being here is
I need to quietly live and give
my every ounce
your every whisper a shout
your every throat cleared
appearance of doubt
I'm an artist fragile, glass,
paper thin
vulnerable to the wind
too enraged to write when I see you engage in your sin,
leave me
I'm wafer thin
Published 9th Aug 2024
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- Edited 18th Sep 2024 8:45am
9th Aug 2024 5:46pm
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9th Aug 2024 6:01pm
Ya i guess i've got some ideas, at least what's been working somewhat for me to some degree, here's a summary, heehee.
Sometimes i wait for one first line to hit me then run with it,
sometimes i force myself to write which leads to 2 or 3 rambles, one of which i post when i'm done with it,
sometimes i need a prompt like a competition or comment from competition,
sometimes something gets me fired up, like a rap song, rap beef or some person cutting me off in traffic.
Really i've been enjoying doing one shot rambles where i don't even look at the screen once while i write, then maybe delete later, i also try to come up with concepts that I'll after sleep on and write later, good luck
Sometimes i wait for one first line to hit me then run with it,
sometimes i force myself to write which leads to 2 or 3 rambles, one of which i post when i'm done with it,
sometimes i need a prompt like a competition or comment from competition,
sometimes something gets me fired up, like a rap song, rap beef or some person cutting me off in traffic.
Really i've been enjoying doing one shot rambles where i don't even look at the screen once while i write, then maybe delete later, i also try to come up with concepts that I'll after sleep on and write later, good luck
14th Aug 2024 2:20pm
I totally relate with this, as most writers probably do..
Perfectly expressed.
Perfectly expressed.
14th Aug 2024 2:42pm
