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If you run out of breath
I will carve out my lungs for you
Only then will we both breathe easily
I will carve out my lungs for you
Only then will we both breathe easily
Published 4th Aug 2024
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my twin
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5th Aug 2024 2:51am
This is haunting, and lovely. The way you showed both your 'held breath' anxiety, and your willingness to share the very air you hold, so briefly is really beautiful
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