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Blood Sun
Blood red sun rising in the east,
Filtered through the particles,
Of moisture and smoke,
Reminding me of broken promises.
The energy and warmth ,
Feeding my soul as though I’ve starved,
Retreating back to what I’ve known,
Only leaving me emotionally charged.
Blood red sun rising higher,
My dreams and wishes fail to find me,
Oh sun can you bring me back?
Is there some way to find peace?
Rain drenching my face and body,
Illustrating those nights that I wept,
Questions and wondering will never cease,
Some things you should just accept.
Filtered through the particles,
Of moisture and smoke,
Reminding me of broken promises.
The energy and warmth ,
Feeding my soul as though I’ve starved,
Retreating back to what I’ve known,
Only leaving me emotionally charged.
Blood red sun rising higher,
My dreams and wishes fail to find me,
Oh sun can you bring me back?
Is there some way to find peace?
Rain drenching my face and body,
Illustrating those nights that I wept,
Questions and wondering will never cease,
Some things you should just accept.
Published 26th Jul 2024
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26th Jul 2024 4:09pm
With everyday sun rising, hopes soar to the sky; wishes for a good day, to find what we dreamt about last night..
But, we must never depend on the sun to find our goals, we must follow our inner feelings , fuel them with hope
and strife, and resolution until we find the shining true sun...
Nice poem full of sweet expressions.
But, we must never depend on the sun to find our goals, we must follow our inner feelings , fuel them with hope
and strife, and resolution until we find the shining true sun...
Nice poem full of sweet expressions.
26th Jul 2024 4:11pm
