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Whispering pine
Whispering pine
Fleeting into essence
with dark aromatics
piercing the sapience of the azure
Gaining wisdom in the verve
secured during its tenure
Collection of souls linger upon the branches
Observing from its emerald palm
A windblown stargaze swaying from idle to sin
If only we rest there a second
Fleeting into essence
with dark aromatics
piercing the sapience of the azure
Gaining wisdom in the verve
secured during its tenure
Collection of souls linger upon the branches
Observing from its emerald palm
A windblown stargaze swaying from idle to sin
If only we rest there a second
Published 24th Jul 2024
| Edited 31st Oct 2024
Author's Note
For the ‘Windblown’ competition
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24th Jul 2024 3:22pm
There's a mystical aura around this poem.
full of metaphor and fine to read as well. good luck..
full of metaphor and fine to read as well. good luck..
24th Jul 2024 3:24pm
24th Jul 2024 4:21pm
Dear E,
For me, I enjoyed the feeling of flight in this piece, only to be reminded that we should really consider taking time to be in the moment. An excellent reminder. Lovely write and I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
For me, I enjoyed the feeling of flight in this piece, only to be reminded that we should really consider taking time to be in the moment. An excellent reminder. Lovely write and I wish you all the best for this comp. H🌷
