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The Original Sin
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Putting down roots
seemed the hardest thing
making commitments
to a love everlasting....
Published 18th Jul 2024
| Edited 18th Aug 2024
Author's Note
My lyrics/Suno music
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19th Jul 2024 12:10pm
Maybe it's just what I've been listening to recently, but I heard this in a sort of gothic rock sound in my head. Dunno if you think in those terms, I just play a song in my head when I read poetry. It's some great imagery, and an very enjoyable read.
