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Light
In the night I tried to find you
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried to find you
no one ever tried….. But I do
I do
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears
Went through the rain and through the dark
try to find your precious heart
tried to break those chains that bind you
grab my hand so I can guide you
All that pain and open wounds
feel insane, no one coming soon
I am the one who tried to find you
follow my light I'm here to guide you
With every tear you cried and dried
You died a little every time
no one ever tried to find you
no one ever tried….. But I do
I do
Author's Note
This was rolling around in my head.
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Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:25pm
Love the lyrics and message. Your a mighty fine writer Fia!!!
Let's get some music to this. What style of music are you into?
Let's get some music to this. What style of music are you into?
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Re: Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:33pm
(Smiling) Not sure. I was dabbling and this came out. I am sure a verse is missing in there. Not sure what it is yet. lol
Thank you for supporting me. Keith
Thank you for supporting me. Keith
Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:29pm
Re: Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:33pm
Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:37pm
To be someone else's light in the dark, is a meaning of life.
I absolutely loved it, great things rolling around in your head.
I absolutely loved it, great things rolling around in your head.
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Re: Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 9:47pm
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16th Jul 2024 9:52pm
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16th Jul 2024 9:55pm
Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 10:58pm
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16th Jul 2024 11:21pm
Re: Re. Light
16th Jul 2024 11:28pm
Now i need to see the gangsta rap! That's your fault for mentioning it. Send it to me!
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Re. Light
18th Jul 2024 10:55pm
In the night I tried to find you
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears..
Got captivated by the your first stanzas, and the rest they said is history.
In my heart I tried to guide you
But your pain won't let me near
Won't let me dry those precious tears..
Got captivated by the your first stanzas, and the rest they said is history.
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18th Jul 2024 11:10pm