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Wrinkles
In days and weeks' time whispers
ghostly silence moments in tides
as it flows like a shadow's print
echoing a clockwork beat
then it's gone like a pawn
of years left behind
through the gate
leaving wrinkles
ghostly silence moments in tides
as it flows like a shadow's print
echoing a clockwork beat
then it's gone like a pawn
of years left behind
through the gate
leaving wrinkles
Published 3rd Jul 2024
| Edited 4th Jul 2024
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4th Jul 2024 4:54am
Dear A,
I liked this write. For me, the thought of time and growing older with life’s experiences etched into our faces was a great concept throughout this piece. Terrific writing. H🌷
I liked this write. For me, the thought of time and growing older with life’s experiences etched into our faces was a great concept throughout this piece. Terrific writing. H🌷
4th Jul 2024 5:14am
