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Don’t Turn On The Water
Hello
Shhh
What are you doing here?
I’m playing hide and seek
So be quiet!!
….wait
Why are you in here?
Are you hiding too?
Yes
I hope they don’t catch us.
I want to stay here longer
It’s comfy
…..
Okay they just passed!!
So Annalyse said that Im
Annalyse?
How is she?
She’s good!
Why?
You don’t talk anymore?
Yeah
Oh
Can I fix it?
No.
Oh
Why are you hiding?
Hide and seek
Then why are you crying?
Because I’m happy to see you
Oh!
I’m happy to see you too!
“GOTCHA!!”
AH NO
okay I’m coming out jeez
Wait one sec…
What was your name—-
where did she go?
I hope she was found.
Shhh
What are you doing here?
I’m playing hide and seek
So be quiet!!
….wait
Why are you in here?
Are you hiding too?
Yes
I hope they don’t catch us.
I want to stay here longer
It’s comfy
…..
Okay they just passed!!
So Annalyse said that Im
Annalyse?
How is she?
She’s good!
Why?
You don’t talk anymore?
Yeah
Oh
Can I fix it?
No.
Oh
Why are you hiding?
Hide and seek
Then why are you crying?
Because I’m happy to see you
Oh!
I’m happy to see you too!
“GOTCHA!!”
AH NO
okay I’m coming out jeez
Wait one sec…
What was your name—-
where did she go?
I hope she was found.
Published 2nd Jul 2024
Author's Note
Me and my childhood self met underneath the same sink cabinet.
(again another stupid poem but its kinda nostalgic and leads to how I ended up loving tight places and hiding I guess?"
(again another stupid poem but its kinda nostalgic and leads to how I ended up loving tight places and hiding I guess?"
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Its not stupid. No honest expression is stupid. It does a really good job of expressing your love for tight spaces. Plus, at the end of the day, writing is for you first and foremost. If it means something to you, if it helps you to get out what you need to, then it's never wasted effort, time or words. I enjoy your style a lot. Its unique, just like you.
I'm also happy to know that she was found and that you embraced her and you are holding onto her.
I enjoyed this piece. Also enjoying some of these other parts of you that you have shown through your writing lately. 🙂
I'm also happy to know that she was found and that you embraced her and you are holding onto her.
I enjoyed this piece. Also enjoying some of these other parts of you that you have shown through your writing lately. 🙂
2nd Jul 2024 3:53pm
