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Interlude 1

I remember the last time i saw you.
I was at my lowest and i decided to show it.
I remember sitting on the floor like 3 feet from everyone else in front of a couch and one person saw me and asked if i was fine.
At the time i was seeing just how bad it all was.
So i did not answer.
They did not push.
That hurt like hell to know that not one person truly cared about me to spend time with me or to truly get to know me.
You put no work in, i only wish to see what time can do.
The point i have made is you will spend time and energy trying to know who a random guy is, but you wont get to know someone who you have been around all your life.
So i left.
Now i'm back.
Lets leave it at that.
Written by I_was_rare_once (RareFaction)
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Author's Note
this is between 9 and ten fyi
the interludes after this one should make more sense because i tried to write them in a more poetic style but anywhoo you are smart and can figure it out :)
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