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Confluence Under The Influence
beneath the surface of these still waters
moods oscillate...irises dilate
forces awaken
coursing through emulsified bodies
stirring a gentle flow
swirling deep undercurrents
into a whirling vortex
from tranquility into sexual tempest
agitation rises
a fissure throbs and heaves
pulled upon the tide
riding a heavily hung anchor
brace & hold tight
for the latent siren's song
this silence cannot long survive
as turbulent currents disturb the bed
chaotic...cajoling...controlling
shifting stability
unleashing untapped abilities
until calm is unsettled
composure slips in Neptune's grip
angling hips..his trident deeply planted
his aggression dominating swells & undulations
basking in orgasmic adulations
arrogance piercing trembling tender
embracing the aftermath of it all..dynamic...climatic
ultrasonic murmurs & deep vibrations
cojoined with ejaculated libations
from a sea snake gyrations...scaling walls
causing sea quake sensations
a tsunami in the making
her 20,000 leagues...all for his taking
moods oscillate...irises dilate
forces awaken
coursing through emulsified bodies
stirring a gentle flow
swirling deep undercurrents
into a whirling vortex
from tranquility into sexual tempest
agitation rises
a fissure throbs and heaves
pulled upon the tide
riding a heavily hung anchor
brace & hold tight
for the latent siren's song
this silence cannot long survive
as turbulent currents disturb the bed
chaotic...cajoling...controlling
shifting stability
unleashing untapped abilities
until calm is unsettled
composure slips in Neptune's grip
angling hips..his trident deeply planted
his aggression dominating swells & undulations
basking in orgasmic adulations
arrogance piercing trembling tender
embracing the aftermath of it all..dynamic...climatic
ultrasonic murmurs & deep vibrations
cojoined with ejaculated libations
from a sea snake gyrations...scaling walls
causing sea quake sensations
a tsunami in the making
her 20,000 leagues...all for his taking
Published 25th Jun 2024
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25th Jun 2024 12:12pm
I love the erotic language used to depict being under the water.
You did a great job with building anticipation and making this a creative feast.
You did a great job with building anticipation and making this a creative feast.
28th Jun 2024 7:55am
26th Jun 2024 1:26pm
The wording in this one is Outstanding. Neptune fits it so well, nice to see him in your work :-)
causing sea quake sensations
a tsunami in the making
her 20,000 leagues...all for his taking > perfect last lines for such a steamy piece!
causing sea quake sensations
a tsunami in the making
her 20,000 leagues...all for his taking > perfect last lines for such a steamy piece!
28th Jun 2024 7:57am
31st Jul 2024 2:02am
So well crafted. This is poetry to linger over. Clever and very interesting.
Great stuff, Confluence.
Great stuff, Confluence.
13th Aug 2024 12:55pm
