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In Another...
Its in the way you close your eyes when you fuck her. That obvious distance.
Sin written all over your face.
Does she know she's a temporary vessel?Something to fill in the gap...until you fuck me?
Did you tell her that you think of me when you slip inside her...
Because it's the only way you can cum?
I laugh at your agony and dismay.
I love that you suffer in my absence!
In the space that divides us, do you really believe she'd be sufficient?
No, love, you yearn for me but she will never be me!
Still...
I want you to see me in her!
Feel me in her!
Hear me in her...
Mi amor...
cum for me!!
Sin written all over your face.
Does she know she's a temporary vessel?Something to fill in the gap...until you fuck me?
Did you tell her that you think of me when you slip inside her...
Because it's the only way you can cum?
I laugh at your agony and dismay.
I love that you suffer in my absence!
In the space that divides us, do you really believe she'd be sufficient?
No, love, you yearn for me but she will never be me!
Still...
I want you to see me in her!
Feel me in her!
Hear me in her...
Mi amor...
cum for me!!
Published 25th Jun 2024
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25th Jun 2024 3:23am
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25th Jun 2024 5:53am
25th Jun 2024 6:23am
A getting at another for their infidelity in verse. As might be summed up in rhyme:
Cum in her for me
vicariously.
Me she should have been,
but she stole the scene,
drew your eyes away,
lured you to her hay.
Cum in her for me
vicariously.
Me she should have been,
but she stole the scene,
drew your eyes away,
lured you to her hay.
3rd Jul 2024 1:02am
What a beautiful request and expectation of hope...never give up, give in, or give out.....
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12th Feb 2025 5:38pm
A way to find solace and satisfaction, bitter to find sweetness. Very nice write!
21st Feb 2025 7:39pm
This piece is raw and powerful, exploring themes of obsession, jealousy, and a twisted sense of control within a love triangle. The speaker revels in their perceived power over the absent lover, highlighting the other woman's inadequacy and the lover's continued desire for the speaker. The imagery is stark and visceral, particularly the opening lines about the lover's detached intimacy with the other woman. The speaker's confidence, bordering on arrogance, is palpable, yet there's also a hint of vulnerability in the desperate desire to be seen and felt, even through another. The final "cum for me" is a provocative and possessive command, encapsulating the complex power dynamic at play.
love it
love it
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