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Amtrak Senryu
no train from Phoenix
just Maricopa
that is a joka
in America
so many bullets
but no bullet trains
Vistaliner, yes
see great scenery
redeeming feature
talk of modern trains
like Europe and Asia
'bout freaking time
another delay
Smokey Robinson playing
tracks of my tears
Amtrak derailments
frequent as my thoughts
both aging systems
just Maricopa
that is a joka
in America
so many bullets
but no bullet trains
Vistaliner, yes
see great scenery
redeeming feature
talk of modern trains
like Europe and Asia
'bout freaking time
another delay
Smokey Robinson playing
tracks of my tears
Amtrak derailments
frequent as my thoughts
both aging systems
Published 21st Jun 2024
| Edited 8th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Something got me thinking about trains.
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21st Jun 2024 6:47pm
Are trains are pitiful next to Europe & Japan. Cool concept, great poem.
22nd Jun 2024 1:40am
Agreed. Pitiful how far behind we are. Thanks for the read and comments. Much appreciated.
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21st Jun 2024 7:03pm
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21st Jun 2024 8:36pm
Few things have torn into the environment like automobiles and their supporting infrastructure.
I also much prefer that choo-choo sound to any car noise.
I also much prefer that choo-choo sound to any car noise.
22nd Jun 2024 2:21am
The train from Portland to Bellingham, or Vancouver BC is amazing. You can practically dip your hand in Puget Sound if you're on the left side.
Good point about cars. It's not just the infrastructure, but the pollution. People all over Phoenix commuting 40 miles each way to work. We do have light rail here, but it needs to expand.
Good point about cars. It's not just the infrastructure, but the pollution. People all over Phoenix commuting 40 miles each way to work. We do have light rail here, but it needs to expand.
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22nd Jun 2024 1:49am
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22nd Jun 2024 1:52am
Interesting. I wonder why we have so much more difficulty than other countries.
Anonymous
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22nd Jun 2024 2:50am
Dear PD,
For me, this piece conjured up some fond memories of train travel. Sure, there were delays and messier cars and breakdowns etc. over others but the relaxed way of travel is what I recall over the bother. Great write. H🌷
For me, this piece conjured up some fond memories of train travel. Sure, there were delays and messier cars and breakdowns etc. over others but the relaxed way of travel is what I recall over the bother. Great write. H🌷
22nd Jun 2024 2:54am
Thanks, H. I have many fond train memories too. I would love to do a short Amtrak Vistaliner trip. Just relax and take in scenery.
