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COITUS
FORGET
my Fucking name
while
I’m TOO BUSY
moaning yours
Usually She's on top
to keep me
From Nutting First
Keeping me from escaping
AFTER NUTTING INSIDE
Your SLIPPERY VAGINA
I TOLD HER
I FUCKING LOVE YOU
SHE looked at ME
and said,
“You are the
ultimate definition of
being FUCKING PUSSY WHIPPED
my Fucking name
while
I’m TOO BUSY
moaning yours
Usually She's on top
to keep me
From Nutting First
Keeping me from escaping
AFTER NUTTING INSIDE
Your SLIPPERY VAGINA
I TOLD HER
I FUCKING LOVE YOU
SHE looked at ME
and said,
“You are the
ultimate definition of
being FUCKING PUSSY WHIPPED
Published 9th Jun 2024
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9th Jun 2024 7:44am
Wow! The right words in the right structure to get the point across. Well done
12th Jun 2024 2:32am
At least you got a woman you can fuck all day and night long. Keep on writing.
25th Jun 2024 3:53am
This is a particularly curious piece...
It took me a minute to understand the love triangle portrayed here,
and I'm liking the angle - the perspective - the second person narrative,
the whole confusing shit show
of splattered intimacy
It took me a minute to understand the love triangle portrayed here,
and I'm liking the angle - the perspective - the second person narrative,
the whole confusing shit show
of splattered intimacy
