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Summer Haiku from the Cafe
Summer Haiku from the Cafe
petunia lass
tastes the grass
with her thighs
single rose petal
among the raindrops
on her navel
Puckish grin
on her androgynous lips
paints the moon
nature’s mattress
a bed of peat moss
for bare skin
eyelashes
shade the fire
of her irises
dark shadings
of midnight
her mascara
petunia lass
tastes the grass
with her thighs
single rose petal
among the raindrops
on her navel
Puckish grin
on her androgynous lips
paints the moon
nature’s mattress
a bed of peat moss
for bare skin
eyelashes
shade the fire
of her irises
dark shadings
of midnight
her mascara
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Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
6th Jun 2024 4:57pm
I love Haikus they are the sum of a bright thought and wisdom.
Stay safe..
Stay safe..
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Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
6th Jun 2024 5:11pm
Thanks Hamid! Very glad you stopped by. I love Haikus too. They are often all of those things. :)
John
John
Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
6th Jun 2024 5:15pm
Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
9th Jun 2024 3:45am
Lots of great imagery in this. Each stanza was like
a small snapshot picture.
Really enjoyed the creativity in your write.
a small snapshot picture.
Really enjoyed the creativity in your write.
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Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
9th Jun 2024 3:49am
Adelphina, gracias mi amiga. Love painting a word picture that you enjoy. Made my evening special my friend. Thank you so much for digging the creative product of my mind and heart.
John
John
Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
11th Jun 2024 10:28pm
Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
11th Jun 2024 11:56pm
Thank you so very much Faith. I wrote twice this much in my cafe sitting but these were the best. Your comment is greatly appreciated.
John
John
Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
12th Jun 2024 00:28am
Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
12th Jun 2024 12:44pm
"nature’s mattress
a bed of peat moss
for bare skin
eyelashes
shade the fire
of her irises"
My favorite lines!
Such short but brilliantly descriptive words!
♡
a bed of peat moss
for bare skin
eyelashes
shade the fire
of her irises"
My favorite lines!
Such short but brilliantly descriptive words!
♡
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Re: Re. Summer Haiku from the Cafe
12th Jun 2024 3:52pm
Thanks a million ChocoLaaTTe! Glad you enjoyed my words. Much appreciated.
John
John