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Mind Fuck
We wear jeans blue and ripped like our minds,
covering legs and knees and asses and genitals,
hiding bodies hinting at fleshy sensuality,
covered like skulls that point at mental solipsism,
shifting singsong hips sway as tremulous tonal voices,
muscles play and pull and pull against torn blue prisons,
minds play and pull and pull against torn blue prisons,
other minds enter wanting that penitentiary,
other minds enter wanting that ultimate cum,
pushing the mind the slit the mind and torn blue jeans,
laying the seed for new mind but only in the mind,
and jeans blue and ripped like our minds.
covering legs and knees and asses and genitals,
hiding bodies hinting at fleshy sensuality,
covered like skulls that point at mental solipsism,
shifting singsong hips sway as tremulous tonal voices,
muscles play and pull and pull against torn blue prisons,
minds play and pull and pull against torn blue prisons,
other minds enter wanting that penitentiary,
other minds enter wanting that ultimate cum,
pushing the mind the slit the mind and torn blue jeans,
laying the seed for new mind but only in the mind,
and jeans blue and ripped like our minds.
Published 22nd Feb 2010
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Anonymous
23rd Feb 2010 9:49pm
in the first and last sentences didn't really work for me; they seemed tacked on somehow. 'Torn blue prisons' was a classy image though, and the mix of well-wrought lines and phrases and vulgarity came off very well indeed.
23rd Feb 2010 10:17pm
Thanks. This is a poem I wrote at least a year ago, and I didn't really make any major changes to it, so I'm not completely sure how much I like some of these older ones.
