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A challenging Friendly Invitation
My Innermost Enemies
Whether I write or not,
It's always frustrating
To believe that there are among you
Those who hate me so
And yet it's even more disappointing
From these same people
Let them spend their precious time
Care about a mere mortal like me
So I tell you my friends
Be my most intimate enemies
Be strong, but not stupid
Be loyal and fearless
Be fair to me, and be strict
Because people like you
Give us strength, tenacity and challenge
People like you push us to test our strengths
It's like a poison that we seek an antidote for
Trying to solve our problems
Help us know who we are
Welcome to the ring, we are thirsty
To know you, to fight you, to challenge you
Dear friends, close enemies
“That which does not kill, gives more strength ”
Published 28th May 2024
Author's Note
If i write such topics, not a grudge i bear and not a hate or jealousy, but, i want only
to come down to those people and talk with them on their own frequency,......hope my message was clearly aired, and not mistransmitted thru their private channel.....
to come down to those people and talk with them on their own frequency,......hope my message was clearly aired, and not mistransmitted thru their private channel.....
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Sorry, Fia, i was in a hurry, a reason i did not even make open to comment , the poem..
Thank you very much foe the observation;
and for the RL add.
Happiness and Respect and success to all of you.
Thank you very much foe the observation;
and for the RL add.
Happiness and Respect and success to all of you.
28th May 2024 7:42pm
Sam, dear friend, i never had enemies in all my life.
my enemies are friendly foes, they help build my personality by being
harsh with me until i get upright and fair to them...........
Thanx heaps for your sweet feedback and the RL honor
my enemies are friendly foes, they help build my personality by being
harsh with me until i get upright and fair to them...........
Thanx heaps for your sweet feedback and the RL honor
