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Final Days

Excruciation
Joylessness tribulation
Alleviation
Vision_of_insanity
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Final Days
(PAULO ACACIO RAMOS)
23rd May 2024 5:15pm
Ejaculation?  PAR
PAR
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Re: Re. Final Days
23rd May 2024 5:23pm
Sure, why not. It could be anything you like. Thanks for the comments
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Final Days
(Debbie)
23rd May 2024 7:40pm
Alleviation would be a miracle for me.

It was a great haiku.
deliabear
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Re: Re. Final Days
23rd May 2024 7:42pm
I understand.
Thanks for reading & commenting
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Final Days
Anonymous
25th May 2024 2:20pm
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Anonymous
Re: Re. Final Days
25th May 2024 4:07pm
Thanks
Vision_of_insanity

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