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Pierce
Like a knife through
The center of an apple
You have pierced
The very core
Of this heart you swore
To cherish and hold
Tell me if you will
Why was your thrust
So devastatingly bold?
The center of an apple
You have pierced
The very core
Of this heart you swore
To cherish and hold
Tell me if you will
Why was your thrust
So devastatingly bold?
Published 23rd May 2024
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23rd May 2024 11:59am
Killer! I love this declaration that slices write through the page.
The image is perfection. Pierce is a great word.
The image is perfection. Pierce is a great word.
23rd May 2024 12:05pm
23rd May 2024 12:01pm
I agree with Debbie. You sliced & diced this poem perfectly. Well executed!!
23rd May 2024 12:06pm
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23rd May 2024 12:08pm
23rd May 2024 1:04pm
I suppose his reply would be a bitter one filled with vile anger. Perhaps familiarity breeds contempt. Perhaps people become unhappy with themselves and take it out on others, or their narcissism prevents them from seeing others as equals. Many questions, huh.
Good one, Faith.
Good one, Faith.
23rd May 2024 1:59pm
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23rd May 2024 3:36pm
23rd May 2024 4:07pm
Reminded me of the line from Shakespeare's play "Julius Caesar" _ "Et tu brute".
Your poem calls out the malice of the betrayer.
Your poem calls out the malice of the betrayer.
23rd May 2024 9:39pm
24th May 2024 12:58pm
Wow, what an amazing write. Love the rhyming pattern and the flow of it.
Those last two lines are nothing short but epic 💕
Those last two lines are nothing short but epic 💕
24th May 2024 3:25pm
