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Storm Jez
It ends or continues
that's how you roll
through the lightning,
igniting scars across
your skin turning
into life long
lessons
it's how you deal
with the rumbling
of thunderstorms,
echoing through
your ears as you
wake up from
a nightmare
because we're
all storm jez, we
either end or
continue.
Published 20th May 2024
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21st May 2024 4:11am
Dear N,
“it's how you deal
with the rumbling
of thunderstorms,
echoing through
your ears as you
wake up from
a nightmare” for me, the imagery of this was beyond compare. Taken out of its context, it’s the best way to describe getting bad news and trying to process it at the same time trying to reject it. This piece was a whirlwind of emotion contained in very tight formatting. I enjoyed the controlled energy. Wonderful write. H🌷
“it's how you deal
with the rumbling
of thunderstorms,
echoing through
your ears as you
wake up from
a nightmare” for me, the imagery of this was beyond compare. Taken out of its context, it’s the best way to describe getting bad news and trying to process it at the same time trying to reject it. This piece was a whirlwind of emotion contained in very tight formatting. I enjoyed the controlled energy. Wonderful write. H🌷
Anonymous
21st May 2024 3:49pm
This really connects storm with emotion. So relatable
4th Jun 2024 1:03am
