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I love you
I love you fuck up
And I hate that I met you
And that spoilt face
That ignores me
And repeat
And I love you even more
As you get bored with me
And do not give me sperm.
And I hate that I met you
And that spoilt face
That ignores me
And repeat
And I love you even more
As you get bored with me
And do not give me sperm.
Published 20th May 2024
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20th May 2024 12:08pm
20th May 2024 2:38pm
20th May 2024 12:53pm
Hi a-methyste,
How Ru?
The gut wrenching rawness is bittersweet. Very vivid imagery-"As u get bored with me and do not give me sperm!
What a fantastic kick. Impactful and very powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Gr8t.
Take care.
X
How Ru?
The gut wrenching rawness is bittersweet. Very vivid imagery-"As u get bored with me and do not give me sperm!
What a fantastic kick. Impactful and very powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it.
Gr8t.
Take care.
X
20th May 2024 1:47pm
Hello :)
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate that a lot. Hugs and love.
Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate that a lot. Hugs and love.
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