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Swaying///Veils
Have you ever had a near death experience
This quest
of
Existence
***
Born to die
Few
ever
really
ever
Spy
or
Espy
***
Veils swaying
***
Pathways
Of
Dark-Metanoia
***
This quest
of
Existence
***
Born to die
Few
ever
really
ever
Spy
or
Espy
***
Veils swaying
***
Pathways
Of
Dark-Metanoia
***
Published 18th May 2024
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21st May 2024 5:03am
Dear CO,
This poem has wonderful imagery and a powerful topic. The quest of existence and near death experiences are deep thinkers I generally try to avoid. From fear. This is a grabber of a write. I’m still pondering. H🌷
This poem has wonderful imagery and a powerful topic. The quest of existence and near death experiences are deep thinkers I generally try to avoid. From fear. This is a grabber of a write. I’m still pondering. H🌷
