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Cherry Coke
Lead on,
brave steed,
up ambled stairs,
this musky room,
abrubt with noise.
Let's climb until we find our chairs
above the sea of girls and boys.
The very back... that's what I like.
We're sucking face on Friday night!
Just take a seat beside me here.
I'll make your worries disappear.
You sip your drink. I'll lick your ear.
Pay no attention to that screen
as I go down on bended knee
and treat you, lover, like a king.
Unlock your door. I'll set you free.
There's no place you would rather be
than here with me
than here with me.
The eyes around us cannot know
the utter bliss of letting go,
but in your face I see it show!
I watch you grow!
I watch you grow!
My Cherry Coke, your Baby Ruth -
It's what's for dinner in this booth!
So, latch me on and grip my ass
before the final scene is cast.
We'll ride like heros in the wind
until our show's climactic end.
I won't pretend!
I won't pretend!
Please fill me when your ship comes in...
Published 16th May 2024
Author's Note
Going to the movies...
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16th May 2024 3:41pm
16th May 2024 5:14pm
Diet ???
Been a while since I heard from my 'secret admirer'...
Thanks for dropping by to visit my cherry.
Been a while since I heard from my 'secret admirer'...
Thanks for dropping by to visit my cherry.
16th May 2024 5:00pm
It’s been sometime since we’ve been to the movies you and I…. I’m trying to remember the name of that film… what was it called ?… I don’t think we ever finished it .. did we?!
16th May 2024 5:16pm
American Werewolf in London...
You were tearing me to pieces,
turning me into an animal
You were tearing me to pieces,
turning me into an animal
16th May 2024 5:37pm
I’m sorry if I sound museum like, but the title of your poem reminded me of the Fugs’ song ‘coca cola douche’. From their Virgin Fugs titled ESP’ recording of 1965. Proudly on my shelves.
About the time when doctors had no sworn secrecy and shamelessly ratted on the girls who sought help from 1st line medicals.
Yes, I’m that old, and I am not even ashamed of it.
Plus 68/69 it was my job to know about what went on record wise.
But apart from all this detail you weren’t waiting for. I like your poem a whole lot.
Keep on keepin’ on, as Curtis mayfield used to say.
Thank you for posting this one.
Kind regards, Gus
About the time when doctors had no sworn secrecy and shamelessly ratted on the girls who sought help from 1st line medicals.
Yes, I’m that old, and I am not even ashamed of it.
Plus 68/69 it was my job to know about what went on record wise.
But apart from all this detail you weren’t waiting for. I like your poem a whole lot.
Keep on keepin’ on, as Curtis mayfield used to say.
Thank you for posting this one.
Kind regards, Gus
17th May 2024 3:26am
Thanks, Gus! I've never heard a song about Coke douche, nor have I heard of The Fugs. I'm glad you like my poem, though. I think a Coke douche would be kind of fizzy.
17th May 2024 9:57pm
Hmm. Too many chemicals in coke. I would advise against a coke douche.
Being in the back seat should give plenty of time for a blow job but surely not the mess from coke!
Richard
Being in the back seat should give plenty of time for a blow job but surely not the mess from coke!
Richard
17th May 2024 10:34pm
Well, to be clear, Richard - I don't do much douching in the back seat of anywhere... and God knows how we got off on this topic.
I prefer Sprite, anyway
Thanks for checking this out and the free feminine care advice. LOL
I prefer Sprite, anyway
Thanks for checking this out and the free feminine care advice. LOL
17th May 2024 7:38am
The very back... that's what I like > me too and it brought back some fond memories.
"Kissing in the backroom of the movies" by The Drifters came to mind. That's an oldie, it always gives me smiles.
Awesome write, lady, I LOVE this one.
"Kissing in the backroom of the movies" by The Drifters came to mind. That's an oldie, it always gives me smiles.
Awesome write, lady, I LOVE this one.
17th May 2024 10:36pm
Thanks so much for that, Duende! You know, they really should make the back seats bigger shouldn't they?
3rd Jun 2024 4:30pm
4th Jun 2024 4:15am
I'm glad you like it, Chikunguobaya! Thanks for reading and letting me know!
