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Vengence
Being torn apart from the inside
Somewhere in this darkness is a child
Who loved, dreamed, trusted and had hope
But lost himself when that was defiled
Anger and fear obscure the way out
Pain and anguish keep him trapped in place
Regret and guilt make him too weak to fight
Its been a lifetime since the light touched his face
While he lays stuck in the void of nothing
The shell continues to move through the days
An empty husk going through the motions
Never present, always stuck in a haze
The darkness feeding off the misery
Growing stronger from the suffering it sows
The boy disappears more each day
Facing annihilation and nobody knows
The boy may find a deserved peace
The world will feel a terrible wrath
When the consumption is completed
Nothing will hinder this evil's path
Vengence and destruction will be unleashed
The world will meet its fate
As they cry and beg for mercy
Staring into the eyes of hate
Somewhere in this darkness is a child
Who loved, dreamed, trusted and had hope
But lost himself when that was defiled
Anger and fear obscure the way out
Pain and anguish keep him trapped in place
Regret and guilt make him too weak to fight
Its been a lifetime since the light touched his face
While he lays stuck in the void of nothing
The shell continues to move through the days
An empty husk going through the motions
Never present, always stuck in a haze
The darkness feeding off the misery
Growing stronger from the suffering it sows
The boy disappears more each day
Facing annihilation and nobody knows
The boy may find a deserved peace
The world will feel a terrible wrath
When the consumption is completed
Nothing will hinder this evil's path
Vengence and destruction will be unleashed
The world will meet its fate
As they cry and beg for mercy
Staring into the eyes of hate
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Re. Vengence
Anonymous
11th May 2024 2:17pm
I couldn’t help but think in this poem that vengeance needs to be rebranded as a word.
Everyone sees vengeance as a bad thing. But what about justice. What about closure. What about breaking through the shit and taking back an inch of power.
I think back to another stunning bastard I once knew, who said vengeance was a catalyst for action. And maybe he was right. Maybe we shouldn’t be white washing pain with palatable paint. Maybe it should be allowed in all the glory of being human.
Thank you for sharing this, and part of you.
-M
Everyone sees vengeance as a bad thing. But what about justice. What about closure. What about breaking through the shit and taking back an inch of power.
I think back to another stunning bastard I once knew, who said vengeance was a catalyst for action. And maybe he was right. Maybe we shouldn’t be white washing pain with palatable paint. Maybe it should be allowed in all the glory of being human.
Thank you for sharing this, and part of you.
-M
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11th May 2024 2:51pm
Your words cause in me a feeling of reflection. The one of whom you speak was indeed full of wisdom. We are taught to lay down and submit because it is the character of a kind and loving human being. That anger is this negative emotion to be hidden and supressed because it is the worst of the human condition. It serves no positive purpose. Meanwhile, the ones who push this agenda take more and more, without any fear of challenge or being held accountable.
Fuck that! Vengence is mine! So sayeth The Darkness!
Fuck that! Vengence is mine! So sayeth The Darkness!
Re. Vengence
11th May 2024 4:25pm
Vengeance is what brews inside. It creates an eruption of hostile feelings. Hate that can become deadly for the other person standing in your way. Let it out any way you can. This poem kicks ass!!
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11th May 2024 4:34pm
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12th May 2024 3:55am
Ill be fine. Just dont be sad. Shine bright my ray of light. Shine bright please.
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12th May 2024 4:06am
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12th May 2024 4:11am
Because I can feel it. Its pure and genuine. I can't fully explain it.
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12th May 2024 4:19am
Darkness always feels the light. It knows the quality. The more pure and honest it is, the stronger the draw, the attraction.
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Re. Vengence
15th May 2024 1:42am
👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 powerful poem 👏 my brother vengeance can be fulfilling in most case's!!
"Tupac " said it best Revenge is like 👍 the sweetest joy next to getting pussy!!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always
"Tupac " said it best Revenge is like 👍 the sweetest joy next to getting pussy!!!
Please 🙏 keep 👏 on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always
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15th May 2024 1:50am