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Loreley

For hours I've been sitting on this rock
Where you wanted to meet me
In the afternoon hours, and now
The sky is already dressed for  soiree
In all shades of orange, red and pink
Where are you, dear, when will you come?

A hundred times I've brushed my hair
A golden wave flowing to my hips
Soft and silken like the
Legendary golden fleece
Longing for your hands' gentle touch
Where are you, dear, when will you come?

I climbed up a steep path to this rock
Hi above the river Rhein
A wonderful viewpoint of the valley
But as far as the eye can see
The sultan of my heart is still not in sight!
Where are you, dear, when will you come?

Did your father send you out with orders?
Or - god forbid! - did you fall among thieves?
Worried and yearning I intonate a
Bitter-sweet song to carry you towards me
Can you hear my calling?
Where are you, dear, when will you come?

Are you on this ship cruising the stream?
I cannot spot you. But what's that?
All eyes on me!
Watch out captain! Can't you see
The dangerous rapids in front of you?
Where are you, dear, please please come!

Oh my goodness, it's too late!
With his slippery and wet fingers
Father Rhein has grabbed the ship and
Pulled it down to his deadly kingdom
Alas, I'm afraid they'll blame it on me!
Where are you, dear, I need you to come!
Written by Sappho
Published
Author's Note
There is an old German legend telling the story of Loreley, a beautiful young woman with long golden blonde hair. Depending on the version, she is described as a witch, a mermaid, a princess or an ordinary girl.
Whenever she was sitting on a rock formation next to the river Rhein brushing her hair and singing a sweet seductive song, captains and their crew were distracted, lost control over their boats and shipwrecked.
The legendary Loreley rock is a
really existing rock formation with extraordinary acoustics.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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