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music (in your heart).....in response to Samnash's poem Brittle  

music in your heart
it can cause your soul to dance
you sway in response

                    OR

you sway in response
with the way your soul dances
from beats of your heart


igniting (senryu).....written with help from some comments of Samnash

her red hair is fire
her green eyes can pierce my soul
my heart igniting

                   OR

her eyes are striking
and the color of her hair
starts hearts igniting
Written by wolfatthedoor1966
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giving credit to Samnash
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