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senryus
music (in your heart).....in response to Samnash's poem Brittle
music in your heart
it can cause your soul to dance
you sway in response
OR
you sway in response
with the way your soul dances
from beats of your heart
igniting (senryu).....written with help from some comments of Samnash
her red hair is fire
her green eyes can pierce my soul
my heart igniting
OR
her eyes are striking
and the color of her hair
starts hearts igniting
music in your heart
it can cause your soul to dance
you sway in response
OR
you sway in response
with the way your soul dances
from beats of your heart
igniting (senryu).....written with help from some comments of Samnash
her red hair is fire
her green eyes can pierce my soul
my heart igniting
OR
her eyes are striking
and the color of her hair
starts hearts igniting
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