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Awry
History repeats
resting still
here alone
feeling ill
what happened
to today?
all motivation
slipped away
lost is time
life a chore
a disposition
required cure
unbearable
unhealthy place
desperate
seeking grace
no light exists
tunnel dark
in despair
without spark
grey and dreary
this day amiss
all seems dull
emotional abyss
resting still
here alone
feeling ill
what happened
to today?
all motivation
slipped away
lost is time
life a chore
a disposition
required cure
unbearable
unhealthy place
desperate
seeking grace
no light exists
tunnel dark
in despair
without spark
grey and dreary
this day amiss
all seems dull
emotional abyss
Published 28th Apr 2024
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28th Apr 2024 9:38am
Emptiness is such a horrible feeling. You describe it well. I hope it doesn’t last too long and sunshine returns to your days.
Holding you in thought, Mel.
Holding you in thought, Mel.
1st May 2024 5:45am
Dear M,
This piece has me thinking how these feelings always seem to be the precipice on which I’m standing when I’m considering doing something I shouldn’t. Especially when I feel life’s a chore. Very relatable write. H🌷
This piece has me thinking how these feelings always seem to be the precipice on which I’m standing when I’m considering doing something I shouldn’t. Especially when I feel life’s a chore. Very relatable write. H🌷
20th Jun 2024 2:43am
24th Jun 2024 7:36pm
Thank you DL. Some days are a bit lacklustre and I had a consecutive few when I wrote this. I appreciate you and your support as well🙂
