wonderful urge

Disappointment and rejections are heavy, don’t forget to give yourself a break.

i may need one, thank you.

This is so sad but beautifully expressed. Wonderful work!

thank you faith

My pleasure as always! Have a beautiful Saturday, my friend!

I really loved the starkness, the hurt and the way it feels like truth.

One small suggestion: tense. I'd change all of the references of the subject to the same tense.

i write
her poems,
she
reads them,
i cannot
conceal
any of
these
occurrences,
but your  

to

i write
you poems,
you
read them,
i cannot
conceal
any of
these
occurrences,
but your  

Great piece, my friend!

thank you Betty

I know the feeling of rejection. I guess that's why it was hard trying to make friends for me, too.

I hope you find a great companion...!

♡

thank you

I thought we were friends as well… until they kick you in the ass…  nice poem

i'm sure we are, thank you

Of course we are friends … I was talking about them, they, he, she, it… all those others who disappoint