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Prelude

its really bothering me how so many of you can hate people you dont even know. but mostly its bcuz so many are jealous or something. Many of you need to understand that life starts when you're born and you are all responsible to whatever happens to you in the future. Yeah i get in trouble a lot at home also just like you all. but we all need to think about why we get in trouble. wouldn't you be doing the same thing if you grew up and had a family? wouldnt you have so much stress after coming home from a long hard day of work that you may think seems easy at your age rite now? look at all the soldier's dying out there. they're protecting our pride, freedom, and country. You can;t just say" oh hey bush was a stupid president." or "hey i voted for obama cuz he's black. that makes me cool" Yeah that's probably the only reason why a lot of you say obama is a good president bcuz he's black. BUT, maybe at least some of you have SOME faith in him. However, we all need to think about all the choices we've made in the past and just say hey, did i really do that? You have to open your mind to all the other possibilities that come out to you. you cant just say "oh look, everyone chose this one so i guess ill choose it to." DON'T DO THAT!! instead you should BE YOURSELF. NOT someone else. if you choose the same decisions as someone older than you, doesn't that make you a copier? not a follower? bcuz a follower follows your inteded path but with his/her own decisions. A copier does exactly what you do and lives like that the rest of his/her life. just read the dang rap already. (btw, i don't really care about the grammar right now. i did this rant when i was 10).
 
This is the beginning
of a story im about to tell
so just sit down
and you better listen well
cuz i can assure
this won't be a fairytale
where you can hear
from a conch shell
 
This is about all the
decisions you gotta choose
and all the
memorable things you gonna lose
this story isnt
about ridin on a cruise
nor is it about
a guy who got drunk from booze
 
i aint rappin about no sex or drugs
cuz i no i aint no dam thug
i dont need to be cool to fit in
cuz under god thats all a sin
this is life
you gotta pitch in
there aint no wrong or right
just keep the friendship tight
 
wheres all the love
i wonder where it went
then it came like a dove
as if it were heaven sent
he wants us to wait
and pass the rainy days
and save up
for future families
where we'll all be happy
no faces will be sappy
nor will lives be crappy
so lets all love our daddies
 
give women rights
bcuz theres no reason to fight
dont disrespect
cuz it shows you got no intellect
trying to be racist?
ill show you how your face is
cuz things aint right
so how do yall sleep at night?
i dont know how or why or when
i ended up in this position im in
but i think its time for change
so lets not kneel down and pray
lets start doing something.
TODAY
Written by babyruff
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