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Not Subtle
no subtle reflections
more in your face hurricane
realising hell fire has form
honesty carries its own suffering
collective shadows bring waves of pain
so much confusion afrisesfrom darkness
addressing my worthiness to life
battles constantly fought hard
this invisible war never ending
counting against me social rules
understanding very little raises stress
buiding pressures that wont release
more in your face hurricane
realising hell fire has form
honesty carries its own suffering
collective shadows bring waves of pain
so much confusion afrisesfrom darkness
addressing my worthiness to life
battles constantly fought hard
this invisible war never ending
counting against me social rules
understanding very little raises stress
buiding pressures that wont release
Published 10th Apr 2024
Author's Note
day 10
total word count 58
unique word count 58
total word count 58
unique word count 58
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11th Apr 2024 00:30am
Be an in your face hurricane.
Make yourself KNOWN.
And you are correct. Honesty does carry its own suffering, but it’s honorable and much better than suffering in falsehood.
Make yourself KNOWN.
And you are correct. Honesty does carry its own suffering, but it’s honorable and much better than suffering in falsehood.
11th Apr 2024 8:47am
