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Patchwork Saniry
lips sttched
together tightly
gloriously gagged
from speach
can no longer
vomit
sharp resolution
of darkness
its all a facade
i don't really
exist here
eeyes bulging
out sockets
hallucinations
finely tuned
screw slowly
turns tighter
worry knows
my frequency
that song plays
so violently
seems on
permanent repeat
name has been
taken again
identity worthless
digitally deleted
deflated like
useless currency
who's to blame
for confusion
when instructions
were never written
just splashed
illiterate graffiti
together tightly
gloriously gagged
from speach
can no longer
vomit
sharp resolution
of darkness
its all a facade
i don't really
exist here
eeyes bulging
out sockets
hallucinations
finely tuned
screw slowly
turns tighter
worry knows
my frequency
that song plays
so violently
seems on
permanent repeat
name has been
taken again
identity worthless
digitally deleted
deflated like
useless currency
who's to blame
for confusion
when instructions
were never written
just splashed
illiterate graffiti
Published 2nd Apr 2024
Author's Note
second entry
total words 76
unique words 76
total words 76
unique words 76
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2nd Apr 2024 10:08am
Dear AP,
I loved the opening of this write. Some days I feel as though I should stitch my lips together to prevent me from saying something well intended but incredibly stupid, I enjoyed your thoughtful insight in the write as it makes me think about self worth and how I present to the world. Excellent write. H🌷
I loved the opening of this write. Some days I feel as though I should stitch my lips together to prevent me from saying something well intended but incredibly stupid, I enjoyed your thoughtful insight in the write as it makes me think about self worth and how I present to the world. Excellent write. H🌷
2nd Apr 2024 10:12am
these are the poems i seem to write easier sadly previous exprience helps
2nd Apr 2024 10:32am
Relatable write, my friend. I think to one degree or another, we’ve all been here. I’m glad you wrote this. Our writing always helps more people than we realize.
Here’s a thought - you’ve survived your previous experience…your track record is 100% as far as that is concerned. Nothing sad about that at all and it gives you quite the deep well to draw from.
Here’s a thought - you’ve survived your previous experience…your track record is 100% as far as that is concerned. Nothing sad about that at all and it gives you quite the deep well to draw from.
2nd Apr 2024 11:26am
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3rd Apr 2024 6:20pm
This vibe was strung together very well.
Diggin the dark mood it evoked..
Diggin the dark mood it evoked..
3rd Apr 2024 6:29pm
